A bunch of unfinished poems

Finishing poemsjust isn't my thing... so here are the unfinished poems I have
it isn't very good, and it isn't done, but I'll post it. (A lot of these are VERY Emo because I only write poetry when I am sad)

Everything is like a melody
Soon to become a memory
Forgotten, Uncared
Silent, I stare
at the one thing nice to me

The transgression into self depression
the final tension of the final session
the fight against their aggression
everything in life is just mesh'n'...
lace,
Speed up the pace
to the end of my case
erase this space
that I call my place

The crow sits by the window
wants to love but can't though
everything is a black hole,
now karma needs to take its toll
and change me to a happy soul
this world is so dull

Murder, Sickness, Cardiac Arrest
this is like any old test but unlike the rest
we can't joke and mess
this isn't to guess
we gotta give our best

everyday my mind plays tricks on me
runs through memories just to pick on me
this trick is so sickening
it continues thickening
The wall I build i constricting me
to the point where I am but a memory
of an easygoing guy, but just to shy
to say hi to the only one I like
(A note to this poem: Everyday I unconsciously reflect on my choices and I see what I could have done, its basically a messed up lecture of the mistakes I can never change)

No soul no spirit no dreams
no point in life it seems
only one thing still gleams
but it can't even see me

The night sky splotched with a moon
I noticed what a fine tune
The moon that night, a deep gray
I know this kind of sounds gay
but from where I lay
man, I could sit there all day
and watch the one thing that won't drif away




For some reason I like having most or half of the poem rhyme, I do have other unfinished poems, but I cannot remember them, nor can I find the paper I wrote them on ^^' these are my depressing poems rofl

I need to find my happy poems...

Turn it into a song!! I'd buy it

Y'know, for some of these poems I was actually thinking of combining them into a song, but I wasn't sure which ones


I am also working on making a song, but I lost the paper with it on it... I am also gunna make another forum for people to post there thoughts and stuff!

my personall favorite is

The night sky splotched with a moon
I noticed what a fine tune
The moon that night, a deep gray
I know this kind of sounds gay
but from where I lay
man, I could sit there all day
and watch the one thing that won't drif away



nice job with all of them though i like them

wow kid
what was the song about??

use all of them pm me I'll help you

Yeah... But I am in a good mood, so I don't like most of them, My depressed mood wrote these...

I need to find my happy poems... lolz I actually managed to finish ONE of those *dances* go me! lolz

Eh... It wasn't working out... It was a slice of life for the teenage soul

I guess I'd call it something like... Pizza rofl!

lmao
then write happy ones

Ill try... lolz

idiots